**After reading my poem 'Simon Says, ' a few readers have requested that I extend it in length, so this poem is the second version that I am comparing to the original to see which is more successful. (You might want to read 'Simon Says' first to understand this better.) **
Simon says sing a song
Simon says stop
Simon says spin around
Simon says hop!
Simon says jump off
A cliff (two thousand feet)
Into the sea below
To Death-oh, what a treat!
(In the gory aftermath
Of this terrible event
Simon was tried for murder
And into prison he went.)
poor lil copycat
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