You comment in restrained style 
But do research in poetic field meanwhile  
Do not find fault with poet or creation  
That shall aggravate the situation  
 
Lion may feel challenge to his kingdom 
This has been witnessed seldom  
No one so far pointed out flaw 
You are the first person to show 
 
Grammar part may cut no ice 
Ignorance on your part may surprise 
You will have hostile reaction 
Not poet may fire with action  
 
His gun is trained 
To fire the shot and drain 
"What you know about poetry"?  
He may make his bullet chamber almost empty 
 
If you are powerful enough 
You return it with smile and laugh 
You may politely point out error 
The hostile soul may now cease to be terror  
 
He too shall realize the importance 
The readers are helpful in perseverance 
Of poetic character 
Else you shall be left alone as simple writer
hasmukh amathalal
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