Life lingers lifelessly 
Neon lights come on by design 
Between parking meters 
Homeward people stand in line 
Subways violently surge to a stop 
Carrying briefcases of sighs 
Stacked like stale sardines 
Hiding their troubled saddened eyes 
Stuffed in a fish bowl world 
Not being able to look out 
Yet everyone is looking inward 
Congestion settles in no doubt 
Suits in poses to well programmed  
Their etiquette weaves not a new thread 
With daydreams in need of repair 
One could be mistaken for almost dead  
Odors collide with fragrances 
Smoke stirs them into one 
With all thoughts on the same track 
Except that misfit concealing a gun 
But the same ending is near 
When we scatter like ants 
In a few crowded minutes 
I’ll be home watering my plants
Alfred Ramos
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/5-o-clock-rush/