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ted de Hallam - Nice Feet, Suggestive Toes

2014-11-08 24 Dailymotion

You can't see me, how you know
I'm up above you down below
Gazing on such sweet repose
Nice feet, suggestive toes.

Was that a wriggle that I saw
Is somethin happenin ground floor?
Or is it jus my mind a-wander
Think I'll stay a little longer.

I'd kiss each digit one by one
Till you holler 'Here I come'
Then I tell you not to bother
Ten are gone but there's one other.





words needs tune.rap?
obvious hook 'Nice feet, suggestive toes.'
repeat 'suggestive digestive' or 'a.n.other'?

ted de Hallam

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