A SUDDEN TURN (original version)
a fish darts forward
as water lilies re-arrange in the water
centered, in the moment
til it once again flits by
or a bird swoops down as suddenly
from the sky
© 2009 Sonya Florentino
A SUDDEN TURN (Haiku version)
a fish darts forward
water lilies re-arrange
space in the water
moment unbroken
til fish again flits by, or
bird swoops down from high
© 2009 Sonya Florentino
Sonya Florentino
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-sudden-turn-with-haiku-version-my-very-first/
