My critiques saw me
Using 'Eyes of the Common'
Judged me unfaithful
I still do a Loving Mourn...
Loyal Friends' Bonding can't be broken
As they communicate so well
Outburst your innermost passion
Advise them with confession
Throw your reflexes as if text messages
Then calmness at hand, gloomy memories
Are nothing but silly jokes
Can be turned into LAUGHTER that evokes...
Enrico Morilla
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/my-konkretong-halimbawa-2/